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Few things Last Forever
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Few things Last Forever |
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Juice New Member
since 2000-09-08
Posts 7Pennsylvania USA |
Few things last forever But I assure you one thing will My love will never leave you ever When you’re old and I am wrinkled I’ll be there still I’ll love you and keep you close to me Here you’ll stay safe and warm The way you deserve to be After being so hurt in the past You get what you need, a love that promises to last Don’t worry. No more pain is coming your way Only my gentle touch and loving kiss to brighten your day I’m never gonna leave and make you sad I’ll always be here to make you laugh Don’t you dare frown while you’re with me Cuz you’re gonna smile everyday, you’ll see Few things are this strong But between us there is a bond It will keep us together forevermore We will find that a lifetime’s not too long For the girl I adore to have a love that’s strong Don’t cry when you think I’m gonna go You’ll never lose me and this you know When you think I’ve given all I have to give I’ll give you more love everyday that we live I’m never gonna leave and make you sad I’ll always be here to make you laugh I love you, baby, and I always will |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I lost myself in this today, it filled me with hope and as I recouperate and rest; it gives me a sense of renewal in young love. Bless you! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
juice~ such love that flows so freely from your pen! hang onto that precious love... it is so very precious! really loved this read, brought some happy tears to my eyes. thank you for posting this. take care ~amy~  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Agent696_DS Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33NY, USA |
Verry Verry touching I'm lost for word. |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
And this is how it should be. Very Touching. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Juice--Yes, this IS how it should be. Wonderful, love-filled poem! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
If you mean what you said or even think you do----I hope all goes well for you. Nice thoughts to words. |
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