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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 be still, my soul...tonight there is no rush; allow the quiet within to rise...let the hours pass without a sound. keep on down that quiet road...find your way to the distant lighthouse; just be still, my heart...love will find you. allow destiny to have her way...so the days pass without a song; there is always that speck of light...don’t be downcast, my spirit. there’s so much to consider...don’t be confused, chaotic mind! the road is long and demanding...don’t be far from me, my precious stamina! if the well runs dry...should the day turn to night, be assured this road doesn’t end. should you be blinded...should the only light on your way burn out, always remember the eternal arms of love that continue to be outstretched. in the end, inspiration will find its way back to you, weary one. -kh 02/04/01 ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So beautiful, snowpants! Very comforting and inspiring! Beautiful presentation too! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris~ just simply beautiful my friend! i am so happy to see that loving heart of yours is still keeping the hope. and you know what? I'll still be around when things are good for you again. By your side I'll be standing to cheer for you. Can't think of anyone who deserves some happiness more!! Loves ya, Amy  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"find your way to the distant lighthouse;" Thank you for the very bottom of my heart for this: "my precious stamina!" I cried "God, let me read something I need, just something, anything, from anyone, and this...this broke me....God bless you thank you a million times over........ "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-05-2001).] |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is avery beautiful and ministering poem of peace and hope. I too express my enjoyment and thanks for a wonderfully written poem Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is avery beautiful and ministering poem of peace and hope. I too express my enjoyment and thanks for a wonderfully written poem Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is avery beautiful and ministering poem of peace and hope. I too express my enjoyment and thanks for a wonderfully written poem Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is avery beautiful and ministering poem of peace and hope. I too express my enjoyment and thanks for a wonderfully written poem Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Denise: thank you, my friend! I am glad you like this! Aims: yep...even when it doesn't seem like it, there's always hope...especially with fantastic friends like you around! Like I told you a thousand times...yer the best, girlie! Thanks! Love ya!!  -e ~~~~~Kathleen: all I can say is that I am honored to be the one through whom God answered your prayer...this one just came to me last night while I was driving and trying to find some peace of mind. Thank you so much for your reply...I truly appreciate it.  Koko: thank you...thank you...thank you...and, um...thank you! LOL  I'm glad you enjoyed this!sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
be still, my soul...tonight there is no rush; allow the quiet within to rise...let the hours pass without a sound. keep on down that quiet road...find your way to the distant lighthouse; just be still, my heart...love will find you. =================== very cool SP ... serene and calming write of promise, hope and comfort. and ya know the presentation gets smiles from me to  wonderful writing. Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very very beautiful, it was peaceful to read, it made my heart hope |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
JM: thank you! I'm glad you like it! and, it's always wonderful to get smiles from you guys! jellybeans: thanks! I'm so glad this touched more people than I thought it would! I appreciate your reply! sp ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful. . . it's always good to know that hope is eternal. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
sp, Excellent writing!! This is truly beautiful and speaks to my heart. Very well done. Thank you for the message. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Sven: thank you! Glad you could stop by! LW: I am glad you could get something out of this! Thanks for reading! sp ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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