Open Poetry #12 |
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A Forbidden Love |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Golden hair blows in the breeze. She waits for him, Only wishing to see Where the love of her life could be. Hills span out endlessly before him. Trials and terrors not yet to see He senses her on the breeze, Yet he knows what cannot be. This maiden was hurt, Her knight was mad, He then strode out, Never coming back. Two worlds separated by fate, No matter what their hearts' desire. Their lives were torn apart, Before their love was allowed to start. Light grows dimmer as night takes control. She walks to the edge, looking over. Her heart makes one final shove… A forbidden love. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
A beautiful story told. Wonderful imagery! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
thanks! i like images.. they're purty. ![]() "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
well writen, Im a little confused as to what happens in the end, but that could just be me. I liked the descriptions. well done. Keith every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
What wonderful images painted by your writing! It's sorrowful (searching for love always is)... and yet the descriptivness adds so much beauty to it. My compliments. "Close your eyes, and you'll see." |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent DE. . . fits your quote perfectly. . . ![]() wonderful writing. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I liked this a lot, also. Sad tale, but well told. Sandra |
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