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Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

0 posted 2001-01-12 01:21 AM

  My Dearest,

  Having been awaiting word from thee,
  and discovering yet another message
  hand delivered,  plans have I been making
  for thy swift return this eve, next.
  Knowing this, brings a rising warmth
  and thoughts so pleasurable,
  as to nearly undo me.
  Please forgive these words
  which I pen so lovingly, if the scribbling
  looks to be hurried, as my beating heart
  can withstand only so much distance
  and so long a time, in its wait to warm yours.
  I believe in you, and your courage
  and forthrightedness in your actions to please.
  And when tomorrow eve arrives,
  I shall relent to your wishes.
  I must go now, as I am overcome
  in anticpation of the morrows nightfall
  and the bringing of my loved one
  home to me, for at least a touch of kiss to lips
  and thus doest not allow the words to flow
  in any sense. I pray
  your intelligence to lead you home
  and the strength of your hands and heart
  back to me, to embrace.

  All I Am,
  Lady Ollyne
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"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-01-12 03:00 AM

Lady Ollyne,
you write the most amazing period poetry I have ever read. The metre,cadence,language and lyrical quality are perfect.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

2 posted 2001-01-12 10:33 AM

  Lady K,
   I greatly appreciate the attention
   given to my words displayed.
   Thank You Kindly,

   Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2001-01-12 10:42 AM

jealous am I of your grasp on the lingo...I struggle with the ones I write and still don't get them correct...but what the heck, I subject my fellow writers to them anyway!

Great work.

jwesley

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-01-12 10:58 AM

[james, you subject well...]

Lady....this is remarkable, and I hope we get many future peeks of yesterday....

absolutely marvelous!

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

5 posted 2001-01-12 11:40 AM

Sir James,
  No need to be jealous, as the words
  placed for this lady to view, show a
  grasp of tenderness and to touch ones
  heart, that is all that is necessary.

  Once again, thanking thee
  Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-01-12 01:15 PM

Lady Ollyne *bows*

again Fair poet, thou hast continued thy tale with love and tenderness such as has ne'er been seen. . . perhaps thou art indeed a "Lost Soul" of that time. . . destined to tell you tale to Lost Hearts here on this plane. . .

until the morrow good Lady. . . *bows*

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

7 posted 2001-01-12 05:22 PM

Lady of Light
   Thy words bring a curve to mine lips
   and the thoughts of all yesterdays
   shall be exposed daily...to thine eyes

   Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

8 posted 2001-01-12 05:33 PM

  Sir Sven,
   My love has many tasks to complete
   before Father allows him my hand in wedlock.
   I await his return from that of his first.
   Mine heart holds great promise in his
   appearance. Tender is his soul and deep
   in thought is this Lady, as she readies
   for his coming.
   If I be, but a "Lost Soul" of that
   time... then I shall place
   my words of heart upon this plane
   for all to see.

    Lady Ollyne thanks thee, Sir Sven,
    for thy words of heart.

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"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2001-01-12 06:31 PM

i love reading these wonderful memoirs Lady.
I hope your pen does not run out of ink ha..

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-01-12 07:51 PM

Lady Ollyne,

You write most beautifully. Lyrical flowing lines that are music to my ears. I hope your love completes his given tasks and returns to your arms safely. This was wonderfully written.

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

11 posted 2001-01-13 06:10 AM

Lady ~V~
   Quill in  glass inkwell
   shall never run out of
   words...

   Thank ye, Lady ~V~
   with the gentlest of sigh
   Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

12 posted 2001-01-13 06:14 AM

Lone Wolf,
   On this night, he shall
   have completed the one task,
   necessary enough, to return.
   Even if but brief, a visit
   that will charm mine heart.

   Smiling then, this Lady shall
   be, come early morn.

   Thanking thee,
   Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

13 posted 2001-01-13 06:23 AM

Lady Ollyne~
Beautiful write, I love to read poetry written this way, it's just devine and you write it so well.
Tarcie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Nan

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Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

14 posted 2001-01-13 09:28 AM

Ah yes... Lady O is an early riser such as I... Do keep these wonderful words coming - I'll surely be up early to read them...

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

15 posted 2001-01-13 05:34 PM

Lady T,
     Pleasing words before mine eyes
     Thanking thee,

     Lady Ollyne

    Lady Nan,
     An early riser this morn,
     as my love wouldst soon leave
     and every second of every minute
     counts doubly precious to this heart.

     Lady Ollyne


"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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