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A Trace Of Lace
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A Trace Of Lace |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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A Trace Of Lace ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~My Valentine weaves a trace of lace~*~ ~*~across the pages of my heart~*~ ~*~reminding me of his smile~*~ ~*~that returns with the~*~ ~*~sweet presence of~*~ ~*~his face upon~*~ ~*~my pillowed~*~ ~*~dreams~*~ ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good gosh...you know my piece "Traces"....? It was going to go this direction, then took another direction of its own....so I'm glad mine did...and I'm glad yours did.... yours is better! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, the traces of lace shine on your face, beautiful! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marge, charming presentation of a seasonal, and timely sentiment! (lasting all the year long) Robert Joseph |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soooooooo lovely, Marge!! Very very pretty!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Not only do you leave a trace of lace just by being in the room but you scent it with the most beautiful fragrance of love. So beautiful and so delicate my friend. Loved it much. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
B E A U T I F U L  I enjoyed this ~coco~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Just lovely, short and sweet~ Take care, Melissa |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"pillowed dreams"....boy, do I love that phrase!! This is great, my little Margie  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge--Love this. Wonderful write. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
ah, - sigh - beautiful, Marge! This one caught me in mid-breath and held me there. I haven't been to Passions much lately - too busy at the moment, but I had to tell you how much I enjoyed this poem! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marge~ my, what a lovely treat this was to read! so beautiful...makes the heart smile. thank you for posting this... wonderful write! take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...I love the words and images that "Pillowed Dreams" brings Happy Valentines day ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is absolutely wonderful dear heart, it is so beautiful. Absolutely love this. (Is this my next challenge love? ) Please not shapes again! Can't it be something really easy. I could do with a simple task, Kari's story one wore me out. Utterly utterly beautiful love it truly is. Excellant work love as always, and it goes into my Margie girl wing. Thank you muchly for this love Take care love as always Mushy It is sooooooo perfect, an ace A Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this one I like Marge. . . wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely writing here!! Love the graphic!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh beautiful!!!!!! Loved the ending To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Marge, beautiful presentation, beautiful poem! Nathan |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A trace of lace, what lovely images you weave, Marge! Corinne |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
*Sigh* How gorgeous is this...a truly wonderful valentine poem, I'm so glad I got the pleasure to read it!  "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
At it again I see! Weaving your poetry heart upon the pages again. Love it! Deb  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love the way you do the things you do, my friend.... jwesley |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
cute, short, sweet, simple...all the good things. "This above all-ask yourself in the stillest hour of your night:MUST I write? Delve into yourself for a deep answer. Rainer Maria Rilke from "Le |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very cute and romantic write, Marge! I love it!! sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
A perfect Valentine poem, I like your format too |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I really like this beautiful poem of yours a lot! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks to all of you for your sweet and caring comments on this little piece. You make it a pleasure to share what I pen. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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