Open Poetry #12 |
Love Me Also Tomorrow |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“ “LOVE ME ALSO TOMORROW”” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Love me also tomorrow, for today will surely end, I’ll be waiting there for you, until dawn’s light does bend… If we meet there on the morrow, it will also be today, so take my hand in yours, our future is not far away… I can’t promise you a rose garden, it’s just not very real, but the one thing we can do, is to make this simple deal… I would ask that you share, your loving heart with mine, to cherish and care for, but not wanting to realign… What I ask honestly in return, is only the very same, this I would promise you, as surely that you know my name… So I ask you to come to me, as I’ll be helping the night, to hurry through its darkness, until I see you once again, in the morning’s early light… ~~~~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well Bill, me thinks you're fixing to get all kinda passions women wanting to love you tomorrow. Well wrtten. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ This is certainly lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Beautiful Bill.....I hope that whoever these words are written for you share them with her.... Be well... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Pale moonlight or early morning light - It matters not, BCI... Your words are a wonderfully romantic beacon... Keep 'em coming, my friend.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice thoughts, Bill. If we can have love tomorrow, as well as today, then I guess that makes it real love.. Hm, did that make sense? Anyway, love the poem. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jwesley - you really think that they would love me tomorrow? Thank you for your kind words. Marge - Loved writing this, and thanks for coming by. Greeneyes - Thank you for your comment, and I hope that she does, but I would also share these words with all. Nan - once again I thank you for your graciousness. No, it does not matter if it's pale moonlight or early morning light, but I is a running! catalinamoon - yes, love tomorrow, as well as today does make sense. Thank for your reply. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I would ask that you share, your loving heart with mine, to cherish and care for, but not wanting to realign… love your style, Bill huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mornin' Bill... Oh, I do so love the line... "to cherish and care for, but not wanting to realign"...that seems to be such a common occurance with people. If you love somebody, don't try to change them. Thank you for these thoughts, Bill! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - nice to see you, and thanks for coming by for this read. Sunny - yes, so true to try not to change them. Thanks once again for your kind hearted reply. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
One tomorrow at a time... what a way to love through life! *S* This is beautiful! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like this very much |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
suthern - thank you for your reply about this writing. And yes, 'one tomorrow at a time', a lovely way to love. vandana - thanks for stopping by, and I'm glad that you liked this writing. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill "I can’t promise you a rose garden, it’s just not very real, but the one thing we can do, is to make this simple deal… I would ask that you share, your loving heart with mine,to cherish and care for, but not wanting to realign…" Beautiful words from such a tender heart. Thank you for sharing. Life is too short! Ariana |
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