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Piano By Candlelight
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Piano By Candlelight |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Piano By Candlelight ~*~ Ivory fingers light a fire as midnight reflects knocking keys on eboney lovers love the resounding sound pounding the door unlocking memories from a half forgotten dream the faded photo in your mind becomes music to your ears BloomingRose |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very lovely Deb ... in both its imagery and emotions memories laced with melody and longing.. well done poetess  Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful images Deb...I always wanted to play the piano...guess my keyboard is as close as I'll get  Great writing~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Love the musical images in this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
So marvellously real - music for our minds! Lary |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
That was truely wonderful. I can almost hear the music now...ah.. thanks for the read. Great job! -Jeremy "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Deb, Awesome writing here. I love the references you used. Very romantic! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Janet~ Thank you so much Butterflies~ Thanks I am one of those wanna be piano players.  Marge~ Thank you, once again I was doing the candlelight daydream thing  Lary~ Thank you  Jeremy~ Glad you heard a little music in the words, thank you  Just love the little smileys  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
LW~ Sorry I skipped thanking you.  I do apprecitate your kind words |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Deb...the title alone is a poem in itself.... the rest was the whip cream on a delicious sundae.... thank you! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When you find the images in your mind and can share them so eloquently in a piece as lovely as this then you know that you are most definitely on your way. Truely a beauty to read my poet friend. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Deb!! Lovely!! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I love how you describe romance and the discovery of love's song of memories in so few words...this is just lovely! The first line "Ivory fingers light a fire" is my favourite. I could picture the scene in my mind~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sunshine~ Yummmm a sundae sounds tasty right now, but I'll take the sweet compliment instead. Thank you. Mark~ Your generous comments always leaves me with a smile. Thank you.  Denise~ Thank you kindly Melissa~ You are too sweet! So glad you like it. |
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