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Thou Art the Song
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Thou Art the Song |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Thou Art the Song Thou art as fair as the morning air all day Thou art the radiance melting pitch-darkness away Thou art as true as the Evergreen's hue- all year Thou art the song in me soft and strong so sheer Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
'Thou art the song in me soft and strong so sheer' Ohhhhhhh I think this is so romantic.......wow.........so beautiful..........smiling big.......  -SEA |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Thou art beautiful as a morning song I could ponder thy words all the day long So elegant and dreamy this poem doth read A touch of thy muse is all that thou needs O thou fair muse of thy pen and quill Writer of poems,pen more if you will:D Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh wow!!!!!!! Leaves me with a soft sigh and a smile! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thou are.................................most wonderful! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done poet. . . thou hast indeed learned the nuances and rhythm of the King's English so as to pen a writ full of love and Romance. . . superb!!! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
How romantic - how deftly woven! A memorable song... Lary |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Very innovative scheme!!! I never thought of it in that way... beautiful I always seem to go about pitying myself; and all the while I'm being carried upon the grace of great winds. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thou hast written a lovely and most gracious poem...I congratulate thee (Did I get it right?) Well done, my companion of Poe! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wondeful Loved it Julie |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Interesting form, does it have a name? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful loyal and devoted poem. I love the song within idea, it gives it such a good ending! ethome |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like the form you used with this one....nice write ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, the entire piece, I thoroughly enjoyed it. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Softly romantic in a Shakesperean style! Corinne |
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