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Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

0 posted 2001-02-03 03:27 PM

Cupid Hast Struck

When with *each breath of desire, ink of passion*
Of one who pens such words of beauty
Inspired thus am I, to use but a few, expressing in fashion
My love of he, who hast struck my fancy.

Ne'er hast one ever reached deep into this soul, mine
Turning inside out, the rushing of blood cloaking, covering
Rising, the heat of longing, sensations tingling the spine
Increasing mine appetite, for thou hast struck a hungering.

Yearning for this eve, when thou shalt return to mine chamber
Dressed I, in sheerness, black, breezes entering as thee arrives
Swaying to the nights wishes, the moonlight pales in light's transfer
Of urges upending, sending us spiraling, lazing as love revives.

I ask of you, must solitude be the finality of our existence?
Cannot togetherness be shared, with Cupid's assistance?

Lady Ollyne

** inspired by ~Victoria's thoughts

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 02-03-2001).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-02-03 03:52 PM

A whisper of a read! Thank you "Lady" and Victoria too for the sweet inspiration...
graciously written!

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

2 posted 2001-02-03 06:14 PM

Lady of Tranquility
    Gracious words, whispered
    in response, delights one
    this evening

     ~S~
     Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-02-03 09:43 PM

My lady - thee are most gracious with words of caring, and wanting.

BC

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-02-04 02:04 PM

Wonderful poem, and lovely style. I enjoyed this.
Sandra

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-02-04 02:05 PM

Perfection.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-02-04 02:09 PM

quote:
I ask of you, must solitude be the finality of our existence?
Cannot togetherness be shared, with Cupid's assistance?

Nay Poet Fair. . . togetherness can be shared. . . and Cupid's assistance shall not be needed. . . only the softest words of thine heart. . . for indeed. . . they could melt a heart of stone. . .

A thousand thousand thanks to thee for the sharing of this missive from thy heart. . .

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