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Let It Fly! (a pep thought!)
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Let It Fly! (a pep thought!) |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
The throb of it beating, veins pulsing with fire: a thought being born - pushing larger and higher! Then timidness creeping in self-induced fear: "A writer? Ridiculous! No one will care." So you bury its heart like potato-peel scraps, or tie it in layers of brown-paper wrap. No more! Let it loose! Set its eloquence free! Give it threads of existence, let everyone see! Give a voice to its need, let it whisper or cry; give it space to expand - give it wings - Let It Fly! [This message has been edited by laryalee (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Laryalee, This is good writing, don't know why it got no response. Enjoyed |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, a pep talk powerfully written yet simply stated. Well done! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is terrific, Lary. I have some good friends who are uncomfortable about showing what they write to other people because they are afraid it won't be good enough, and others who won't even try to write.  Wish we could hire you for a rally. This is very well said.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, how perfectly marvelous. I eat potato chips often while I write...... "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I agree!! This is good. And if you have the urge to write, let it fly!!! |
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