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A Moonless Night |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Paint me a moonless night and no stars in the sky and I will surrender teach me how to fly take me to the edge until I can no longer climb paint me a moonless night Please, one more time Do not cuddle me like a sparrow my eagle in flight make me sing like a canary in the dawns early light Make me flutter like a butterfly in your net of passion release my love within my heart of emotion And if I fly away and never return will the winds on a moonless night In the nests of love yearn? A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely and yep, they'll yearn...and long, and wish and dream and hope and....and... jwesley |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I loved this poem, very beautiful, tender, simple, open. Thanks, AP |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Paint me a moonless night and no stars in the sky and I will surrender' Hmmm....great lines, Victoria! Wonderful write! sp  'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
and you paint a wonderful romantic piece here.....treat to read. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, what a write, dark and yet compelling. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you james..aahhh i hope so.. ha.. thank you for peeking in.. agust..thank you for taking time to read agust. appreciate your kind comments. snowpants...my sis lives in NJ too..Swedesboro.. nice to hear from you today Thank you Charisma..Hugs to you too. kethry..thank you and thank you for visiting kethry.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Beautiful Victoria! Would you like some candy! Ha!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
haa...you are too funny insect...  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"Make me sing like a canary" Oh, Victoria, these words should be engraved somewhere for all women to be inspired-or is that men!!! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you kathleen...glad you enjoyed...HUGS...  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Lady Victoria, My guess is that the winds shall never let you down Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully written... enjoyed very much. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Lady and Mike...I appreciate your kind comments today...  Thank you for peeking in. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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