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For mine only, my gracious friend
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For mine only, my gracious friend |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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If you wish? then wish it- BOLD. Be willing, barefoot, through the coals. Begin you now with pump of heart breathe it--eat it... make wishes ART. Let the past be gone and then Let yourself belong and when? It comes undone? DO IT AGAIN. re-make yourself yourself my friend.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
serenity, so well written with a pointed ending. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
AND? hand over heart...I promise to do the same. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
"Remake yourself" seems something that we do everyday. You have written this wonderfully  Rich [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hmm...excellent advice, serenity! Great write! sp  'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
it's a great poem, really..... i can't take the advice though.... i screwed up the first time, can't trust myself for a second...  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
if you wish....helen |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
ser~ really enjoyed this! excellent write and very catchy take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Exactly -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*Applauds Loudly* WOw, what a great piece. You know you have the rhyme and rhythm down when a poem sings itself when someone reads it and this one does ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I sure hope everyone still understands..I love you all so much...and THANK YOU. yer lovely, yanno that? |
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