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Open Poetry #12

Seul

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-02-02 01:48 AM

Seul

In
a
matter
of
moments
I
went
from
a
kiss
in
the
rain
to
an
empty
shell
in
a
storm

6/19/00
snow

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most but deep,
swift and full of life to one,
lucky enough to fall
through the ice."
from "Watercouse" by: Snow

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 02-02-2001).]

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

1 posted 2001-02-02 06:41 AM

I like those simple words, very nice, AP

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2001-02-02 07:51 AM

Wow! how can so few words pack such a punch.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

3 posted 2001-02-02 07:58 AM

Neve, you are just so good...I love your writing. (and you...wink) So much said, in so few words. An emerald eyed specialty!

Robert Joseph
~enb~

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2001-02-02 10:40 AM

AP..I'm pleased you like this... thank you.

Kethry, thank you so much!

Robert, *smiles* thank you ~eyn~

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