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Longing For You |
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Tammy16 Junior Member
since 2000-11-26
Posts 21 |
LONGING The feeling that creeps into my chest everytime I think of you and how much I still love you. HOPEFUL The feeling I get when I see you walking towards my front door to pick up our children for the weekend, hopeful that you will want me too. DESOLATE The way I feel when you are leaving and I want to run after you and throw my arms around you only to love you forever. WISHFUL The feeling in my heart when I pray for you to turn around and tell me you love me again too. DEEP SADNESS The feeling I get when you tell me that you no longer have a need to be with me. That you want to explore all of your options in this vast world. ELATION The joy in my heart when I realize that there is one release from all of this emotional pain. DEATH. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tammy~ Welcome  This is so very sad..........death is not the answer, finding the one you were truly meant to be with is, and clearly, it isn't your ex........I hope your heart heals...... -SEA |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
There is a friend waiting for you. He hears the longing and hurt in your soul. Look out and about he is your just due. Don't let death be your only release. Your words are too powerful and the world would be less without you. |
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Tammy16 Junior Member
since 2000-11-26
Posts 21 |
SEA - Thanks for the welcome...I know death is not the answer....just feels that way most of the time. My heart will heal if he ever returns. Don - Thank you for your reply and kind thoughts....hope I can find my true release soon. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Death doesn't relieve pain it only covers it over. Remember That what your children offer you is far more than any man can. Hope you understand this the way you need to. Wonderful job at expressing feelings Rich |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tammy16, Welcome to passions, I hope your stay here is worthwhile. Writing helps and so does having good friends. You will get both here. *HuGS* Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions Nice poem |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! We hope that you will find this new home to be a warm and enchanting place...and check your e-mail for a special greeting! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Tammy...........first let me say welcome to you to passions.....your poem is so sad...but echoes how many of us feel...please let me extend a hand to you in friendship...find as i do a sanctuary in passions to pour out your longings & your soul...also let passions be your phoenix as it is for me...for from here we SHALL rise...take my hand & we will struggle together. [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ha..ha..Tammy nice try...having experienced this same situation I understand the death desire...however the answer for me was acceptance...yes the pain seems as if it will never end and anger can visit many times but when we accept our fate life does go on and many new experiences are waiting upon our desire to move on...James |
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