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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME 
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Ice storm in my heart It can never be spring here Until you come back |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KCS~ Now THAT would be sub-zero temps !  Poignant Senryu. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Hi KCS - This is a moment of loveliness! I like what you do! (Your 'Perhaps' still lingers in my mind) Thanks for your comments on Encircled! Lary |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes...lovely "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
hope that he will come soon, to soothe the ice-storm and bring you warmth. Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
kcsgrandma, Excellent writing. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Marilyn!! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, how I relate, well expressed! May the ice on your heart melt with his touch upon Spring's dawn... Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams ~Melissa P. Monette~ |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Marge - Yup! It's pretty darn cold!  Thanks.Lary - Thank you for your sweet words! Nice to have you here! Kathleen - Thank you. Charisma - Thanks. I'm afraid it really will be spring before he comes back.  Seymour - Thank you, kind sir! Denise - Your kindness is always appreciated. Melissa - Thank you for your lovely poetic wishes!  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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