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On Beaches
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On Beaches |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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On Beaches Just another crystal day in sparking southern climes, like every former summer spent in search of perfect times. Two girls on rusty bikes begin their coastal journey in the pink seashell dawn, they fly to the sea. Pacific Beach, with its seedy sorts wake from sandy sleep, to spend the day pandering, for beer, on the beach. The girls ditch their bicycles, walk along the softened shore, there they find true nature soaking in the ocean’s lore. Heading north to Bird Rock, down rocky cliffs they climb, hear the whisper of tide pools, they slip on lichen slime. Startled crabs click and side-slip into a cleft; the sea anemones’ soft sway lures with an almost feminine theft. Pedaling to Wind ‘N Sea, to watch golden boys surf, two girls passing through local, private turf. Next, on to Marine Street, where the kids hang out, to put in an appearance along their northern route. The last stop, Encinitas, a warm town to embrace, backs flat on the sand as sun and ocean race. © 2001 Corinne Bailey |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Oh, let's skip Spring and get straight to Summer !  What a lovely thought is this - 'in the pink seashell dawn' Memories making footprints all over the sand ! Thanks, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yeah, let's skip Spring entirely and head straight to the nearest beach!! This is beautiful writing, Corinne!! Love it!! Denise |
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SamIAm New Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 3 |
Carefree and beautifully painted. Loved the images in this! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A journey wonderfully painted, Corinne |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
If I don't get to the ocean soon, I'm gonna bug......... this makes my heart ache for the sand in my toes........love it! -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
A fine poem and a great read, I felt the senses awakening in each and every line. "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love the imagery and these make me desire for the summer. loved and enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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