Open Poetry #12 |
to many miles |
star 15 Junior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 26 |
so many miles between us to different worlds we share. our love for each other will go strong. and will always be there. soon we will meet face to face and the world will become a wonderful place. one world it will be just you and me nothing will matter the can wait. our love will become one and our harts will abaite our love is forever no matter what or who or however we will grow strong and live forever young our love for each other will keep us young and never ending. we will be together and be necer apart because of the love in our hearts. ____________ hope this is ok im not the best poet in the world. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like it Star! People can be physically separated, but still connected in love. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You know, I truly basked in word I just read!!! "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Star~ A delightful piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful Star I too have felt that longing for someone far away , love can trumph just believe in it Julie |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love is wonderful, and so is your poem. enjoyed it very much. so up above with you. Charisma |
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