Open Poetry #12 |
One Word |
CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Pen touches paper Ink paints over the white Thoughts materialize Words write. Water, wind Earth and fire Feelings inside Dearth of words. Pen stops for Just a while Them comes back And paints The Word: YOU |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CD~ A wonderfully warm thought. Nicely said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I see that your words can mean so much also. Love this one... jsom |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I love the direction this headed, and the ending is perfect...nice work |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Love this... bernie Bernie Slicker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
really liked the thought in this one CD sometimes the "YOU" that you see from where you sit..is the most beautiful piece of artwork... good one hugs, g there is no BEST in a world of INDIVIDUALS... -unknown |
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