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Canterbury Bells |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Let us lay upon the pillow of the sun upon the Canterbury bells with you let me get lost within your eyes your loving eyes of peacock blue Your eyes have a chameleon hue ever changing in the balmy breeze but chameleon kisses lips pursue teasing softly with expertise In your arms under the willow trees planting softly kisses upon my skin dusk falls quietly to its knees kissing sunset, dawns fraternal twin Upon Canterbury bells blue violet and white lost within your eyes, a peacock bright A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Victoria...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed this thoroughly, Victoria, thank you! Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much kathleen and james..i enjoyed writing it..thanks for peeking in  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
You can get lost within my eyes anytime Victoria? Very pretty write!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can hear them now Victoria. . . wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you insect haa and sven..love hearing from both of you..HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ Very pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Marge..and for peeking in..appreciate your comments HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
In your arms under the willow trees planting softly kisses upon my skin dusk falls quietly to its knees kissing sunset, dawns fraternal twin beautiful lines and colors always imaged ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sooooo lovely, Victoria! Very lovely! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you wynter and denise...im am pleased you enjoyed ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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