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Open Poetry #12

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bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2001-01-31 02:09 PM

Sitting here,
thinking,
wishing,
wanting,

Oh hi honey your home,
having,
touching,
(just plain)
loving.

jpom

CD
Member

since 2001-01-27

Posts 101

1 posted 2001-01-31 03:33 PM

"(just plain)
loving."

Sometimes in using a lot of adjectives, we lose the real meaning (and feeling) of what love really means. Your short poems are just great!

You are just great in capturing the most meaningful words in the shortest poems I have ever read

I loved this one too!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-01-31 04:16 PM

It's nice to have someone at home thinking about you and waiting for your return...James

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

3 posted 2001-01-31 07:43 PM

Nice touch

bernie

Bernie Slicker

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-02-01 03:02 AM

this is so nice

-SEA

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