Open Poetry #12 |
Aquatic Delights {senryu sequence} |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
crystal liquid blue snorkeling Hanauma Bay live aquarium pretty coral reef the fish will eat from your hand delightful pastime marine parrot fish darting in and out of caves playing peek-a-boo little puffin fish blowing cheeks up very big please don't come near me! playful sea horses bobbing along in currents happy trails to you jumping porpoises laughing tourists get all wet entertaining show Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Did you see porpoises there...I need to make it that way again.. I have seen porpoises scuba diving out of Coco Marina...James |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is out of my experience, but I enjoyed the images and think it is too lovely to sink out of sight, so BUMP! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
LOL thanks for bumping it up ,Marilyn and James..yes I have on occasion at certain times of the year seen them near there. I didn't have an eel gif. to put in here,but I have seen plenty of them too.LOL and one shark one day...eeek thanks for commenting on this fun senryu. mahalo! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
KoKo~ big smiles here......enjoy the imagery -SEA |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful scene very descriptive words cool graphics too thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
KoKo: why haven't I seen these one before.....where did you hide this beauty...oh my...I must be blind looking over these fabulous piece.....excellent my friend. ((hugs))) Charisma |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
KoKo...... Simply exquisite, and what I wouldn't do right now to be swimming in a warm island bay with the fish!! I love reading your work, as it takes me to warm climates!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wonderful marine senryus - perfect graphics! Take care, Melissa |
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