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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2001-01-30 11:31 PM

Do you hear my love
I am the night
that surrounds you
with my cape
of soft blackness

The winds that blow
over and through
you with gentleness

The moonlight that gives
you light, the stars that
reflect your eyes

The sun that brightens
your day, the streams that
flow through the heart of you

The fire that burns
the passion within you,
the white flame that
drives your heated
nights, the blue flame
that makes your
body sweat

I am the stillness deep
within your soul, the nature
of your world

each whisper
of your heart

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-01-30 11:36 PM

.......and for me, that would be the ocean........this is beautiful

-SEA

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-01-31 12:26 PM

The fire that burns
the passion within you,
the white flame that
drives your heated
nights, the blue flame
that makes your
body sweat

I am the stillness deep
within your soul, the nature
of your world

each whisper
of your heart

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whew..thats quite a whisper

very very nice GE...
very cool too
love the flow and feel of this
well done
jm

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-01-31 08:04 AM

GreenEyes~
What lovely whispers !

'I am the stillness deep
within your soul, the nature
of your world

each whisper
of your heart'

Absolutely lovely !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2001-01-31 08:26 AM

I am the stillness deep
within your soul, the nature
of your world

each whisper
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Simply beautiful!
Deb

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-01-31 07:36 PM

what is said in those whispers. . . lasts for a lifetime. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2001-02-03 12:39 PM

Thank you for all the kind responses....I really appreciate all....I still have been under the weather, so right now my time on line has been limited....be well all....

Greeneyes~

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

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