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Stolen Dreams
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Stolen Dreams |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Stolen Dreams ebony clouds, the dance floor where my shackled ankles find my partner his talons d r i p from the still beating heart of the one who walked before me hush....and you could hear her hollow screams still cursing his empty soul for all the stolen dreams we hide in lies... for all the stolen dreams ... still hiding in her heart |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WOW! This is amazing.......so many things came to mind so fast........just amazing  -SEA |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
YOWWWY! GREAT WRITE!! into the library....  hugs, g "i know its kinda late i hope i didnt wake you but theres somethin i gotta say-- i knew you'd understand..." jcroce |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
thank you both for the wonderful comments! they mean a lot to me snow |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Snow, Powerfully haunting imagery in this one, wonderful work here. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SNOW! I think you've tied my tongue! Wonderful! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Snow, all I can say is I wish I had written this. Surperb! jwesley |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Snow, Wow.. that is all I can think of to say at the moment! Wow wow wow. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Snow-Wonderful write. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
I'm always amazed, Babe! Love your work...Wink! Robert Joseph ~enb~ |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Cerenity... thank you so much! Sunshine, wow, that's a heck of a reply! thank you! jwesley...I am so honored that you have said that. thank you. rosepetals25, believe me, you have said a lot! thank you. Poeminister...thank you so much for the reply. Robert, I love to amaze you ! ;-) thank you all very much, Snow |
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