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Weeping Tree........Tanka
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Weeping Tree........Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Weeping Tree Weeping tree on lake caress gently wave of life cascade of green leaves food and shelters will be found fortitude of nature's grace Charisma |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ I was wondering if I'd get to say hi to you today! HI!  This is beautiful....... -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is perfection in it's simplicity, Charisma, great work and a beautiful layout! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
They are nice to lie under too but I bet you knew that. This was a lovely Tanka my friend. You present the beauties of life and nature to us in superb fashion so often that I am constantly amazed. Don't stop ever. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful poem and photo! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
I love this! snow "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea: hello my friend, nice to have you around here....and glad that you like this one. Sunshine: thank you Kathleen: thank you for the lovely compliment. Mark: yes I know that my friend... and how could I ever stop writing over the beauty of our nature in this form....love both to much.... Vas: thank you my friend Snow: glad that you love it. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Charisma--Lovely tanka and image. Very nicely done. Poeminister |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you poeminister for your lovely response, I always appreciate it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ This is so lovely. And in the willows whisper Sometimes a joy is found Among the weeping branches That gently touch the ground Sweeping across a heartfelt sigh Offering nature's beauty a nest to tiny thoughts that fly Your words swept across my heart. Thank you for the gentle portrayal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Marge I am so glad that these one inspire you too...thank you for for these wonderful lines of the willow....one of natures beauty's. its always nice to have your lovely comments. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
OOPS! Didn't get the photo, but based on your past one's, know it was beautiful, as where your words... jwesley OOPS! Again. When posted it the photo appeared. Yep, very pretty as expected. [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
jwesley: thank you for your kind reply, and I am glad that get it all....at least...its always nice to see you around. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, I agree, weeping willows always make me smile and when I see how far their roots and leaves go, I always marvel over how it brings shelter to so much of nature such as birds and flowers and butterflies! (kiss on cheek) This is another beautiful gem from your heart, sweet friend, I am so happy to be finding so many of your wonderful poems in these archives, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I love th' soft grace of this. She said burn ... together. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! the picture is awesome and the poem too...makes me want to be there! |
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