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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Thinly-crusted dawn rising. Malleable molecules breathing, flexing, stretching to the pull of my heated desire. Rising further, crusting firmer, encasing potent flavor. Sigh of relief, thrill of achievement - "Behold - my wonder loaf!" Bashful acceptance of recognition, unobtrusive bow. Sound of slow, slow whooshing. Breathing out, not in. Mountainous magnificence now pancake fodder. Guess some days are like that. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Interesting and creative way to put it!   WELCOMETO PASSIONS |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROTFLMAO...indeed, some days ARE just like that! Well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very enjoyable. *G* Welcome! |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Thanks for your comments - I'm glad you like it...and thanks for your welcome! (BTW, my days are better, now that I have a breadmaker *g*) Lary |
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