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Quest For Love |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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In the quest for love hath I offend ‘d thee? I hast but only thy heart to surrender Shalt I listen to rubbish of a banshee Curl up and die without words, tender ‘Tis my touch o'er bearing your soul Speak'st not with the sword of thy tongue Whilst swiftness of word's thy lip's troll Til dismal word's, mine heart you have hung Should'st upon thy death bed calls my name I shalt embrace, thou whispers' to my bosom Ah, thou final breath, thy kiss shall claim Bittersweet lips, powder blue not plum Fare thee well, I forgive thee for being cruel Fare thee well, my love, for thine hath been a fool < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-30-2001).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
WOW! This is excellent Victoria! You are amazing when you write  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much insect..you are TOO kind happy you enjoyed. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, even in the mourning of a fool (smiles) your words are rich. Great work! Robert Joseph |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Powerful writing...great work! Nathan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
BRAVO!!!!! Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Robert, Nathan and Kathleen.. I appreciate all of your comments very much Thank you for reading today ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Lady Victoria 'tis a fool who turnest down one who offers love from thee Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent! " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you lady and eddie..nice to hear from you both.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
i agree with RJ - a fool for sure |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
Wow......now this is writing, EXCELLENT!! you go girl~!!! *S* Z Life is an adventure to be experienced |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Vic, you have written a great poem here, and the ending, ah the ending, I MUST borrow it Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent. . . I must say Lady Victoria. . . thou hast indeed done well with this poem. . . carry on!! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
bill.. zyell.. sandra.. and sven..thank you so much for your very kind comments. I enjoyed writing it... HUGS to all..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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