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inspired by "The Prince of Tides
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inspired by "The Prince of Tides |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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inspired by "The Prince of Tides" to be another's keeper of anamnesis to call back the good in what he or she is then watch the tears flow down the window's pane mirroring the pain to think ~ no, go not there, not again where only water's edge held the edge in liquid hope to therein cope until lack of breath sped them toward the light to hold a phone this line of hope remote of course cordless, no real line just the passions crossing the miles decreasing smiles scars and scarring which occurred left this chasm of unassured but he pretends to be assured and reassures those unsure anger, anger, anger held criss-crossing lines that meld till no more is there a memory but he was a brother to his sister, see and held her hopes in her poetry tidal waves are calling him back they called her too, even more, but she lacked a strength of soul for it was lost you see in her lines of poetry she wasn't who she wanted to be so, this story talks to me of where art is, where it should be and much of life is as I see in the art of poetry and you may tidal wave me in 01.28.01 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Karilea, you are on a roll with your poetry, you have penned some real gems this week. I've read this twice, I had to do so, to let it all sink in. You have a unique way with words. I saw the movie, and this is a creative twist, all your own. Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Melissa....this was my interpretation of the movie....even though it came out years ago....this weekend was my first opportunity to watch it, but I'm afraid I do not do the poem justice, as I had numerous interruptions.... ah well.... thank you for reading. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A great movie - and a great poem - and all I can say is "you're far too humble" |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love it. You've convinced me I ought to read the book or watch the movie one of these days.  Poeminister |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
"and you may tidal wave me in" Wow! Kari so wonderfully appropriate and so impassioned! I was washed away by its flow. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is a great read Sunshine... Thank you... ~coco~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is one of your utterly perfect pieces. How can you think you don't do it justice love, this is surely one of the best writes ever. You have written this so well that I can see the movie playing again in my head. Such a wonder you are love, and this is just perfect. Thank you for this dear heart it is perfect Take care as always love Majestic Marsha   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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