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Sapphiric Flame (Dizain) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sapphiric Flame Between us is the sapphiric Flame, enveloping and rising higher as we steer- vessels, of the Soul, our eternal name ministering our part, in this, our sphere. holding visions to roam, dreams clear in the heart of love, to ever combine ruling the hand of Thought to design illumination, art, from bending light, spreading the flame, forever, to shine a oneness, in time, bold and bright Poeminister< !signature--> "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-29-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This....is wonderful....and is now in my library.... Thank you! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ How very lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine--  Thank you for reading and the honor in the knowing its been placed in your library. Marge-- Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. take care, Poeminister |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh.....I like this SO much! -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA-- Thank you. Glad you liked. [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is very lovely...dreamlike...I like it lots |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Paula-- Thank you. It was my first Dizain. [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-29-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Revised: Sapphiric Flame Between us is the Sapphiric Flame, enveloping and rising higher as we steer- vessels of the Soul, our eternal name, putting quill to scroll, in this, our sphere with visions in which to roam, dreams clear in the heart of love ever to combine our hands of thought to weave and design illumination - art, from stretching light, spreading the Flame, forever to shine a oneness, in time, bold and bright [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-22-2001).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh POE, this is sooooo goregous... I'm keeping this one sweetie it's a jewel... And btw I've read your revision and that is a sweet treat of a read too... Your poem just left me with smiles and I thank you for the delightful read ~coco~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
loved reading these wonderful piece. excellent as always my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Beautifully done! Thank you for writing this! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I like both versions! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Coco-- Thank you so much for enjoying this and your comments. James-- Glad you liked. Thanks for peeking in. Charisma-- Thanks for reading and most of all loving it. Voiceless-- Appreciate your stopping by to read. Glad to know you enjoyed. Kathleen-- Thank you for reading. take care, Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-26-2001).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Poeminister, These I loved and if you would not mind could you tell me what form is Dizain I tried to find it but was unable, very much enjoyed the reading. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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