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Frozen Light
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Frozen Light |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Frozen Light I never thought it likely dear Light could stop like a frozen gear. To freeze it, to a non exist To store it, for a new enlist. But its been done much to my awe They stop it dead to start once more. A truth I've learned symbolicly With pen and ink in poetry. A truth I once was blinded to A truth I searched and never knew. A truth that opened up a way To keep you in my heart to stay. No longer do I tear your loss No longer do I bare that cross. But understand the way of light The start and stop of souls in flight. To most you are beyond my say But I awake you every day. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Yes, you do.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Fascinating! Great rhythm and flow. Enjoyed! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But its been done much to my awe They stop it dead to start once more. A truth I've learned symbolicly With pen and ink in poetry. A truth I once was blinded to A truth I searched and never knew. A truth that opened up a way To keep you in my heart to stay. No longer do I tear your loss No longer do I bare that cross. But understand the way of light The start and stop of souls in flight. To most you are beyond my say But I awake you every day. ======================= and you make time stand still ... and take breaths away as well. Sy, this poem touches me in places deep today... what an absolutley perfect poem ... what a gift from your pen .. from your gifted pen tis poems like this that make poetry the treasure that it tis ... and the poet is a gift golden as well *winkiewinkie* sweet Stinky love ya me "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Cute, *L* VAS, Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the read. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What a marvelous way you have found to stop time and light, to hold in remembrance a loved one! I will have to read more of your work.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kcsgrandma, Thank you for the read and beautiful comment. JM, We must have crossed in the mail. Your answer is remarkably sweet it always is. As you say you always ching my chime. I'm glad you liked it, it was sort of aimed twards you. Our friend Mark is doing some fine writing. I like his work. I'll see you in my dreams. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Seymour what a fabulous write, love these excellent write. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma. Thanks loads for the like and hugs. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"But understand the way of light The start and stop of souls in flight." Sy--I like this muchly. These lines especially speak to me. Very nicely penned. take care, Poeminister "Awaiting welcome light of glory's gold, I search the night to fan salvation's spark." --Claire Brown Bower < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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