Open Poetry #12 |
She |
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
She took me for granite, ...I am not a rock, Sweet purrs of nothingness, ...can't turn back the clock, She walks in the room, ...saunters over to me, Lays down on the sofa, ...as sleek as can be, Her head in my lap, ...looks up with slight smile, I fight off temptation, ...of feminine guile, Eyes of green opals, ...No one is speakin', She rubs on my leg, ...I feel myself weaken, My hand inches downward, ...O' what I have I done, From rock to soft putty, ...Once more Cat has won. |
||
© Copyright 2001 Mike - All Rights Reserved | |||
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFL... Face it, Mike - You're just plain EASY!!!... |
||
Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Sir Michael, Thou hast blest me with a smile this morn. Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare |
||
bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Mike This was kewl, glad i didn't read or see the last line, until i actually read down to it......... Great write. |
||
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Loved it Mike haa...great write ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You old cat lover you! I had it from the purr.... delightful! |
||
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
just say MEOW baby...LOL love a man who'll admit he loves the cat cute and clever tease of a poem ... way cool "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
||
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
purring over here too...what a delightful read, Mike! (serenity exits, grinnin' like the cat that...) |
||
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes! Absolutely delightful! May I keep a copy? Also, since this board moves/changes so fast, I often forget which ones I absolutely want to go back into. So could you e-mail me this poem at < [email protected] > if I may have a copy. Purrrrretty please! |
||
kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is a delight, and so well-written! Thanks for bringing a smile to my day. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
||
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Not a cat lover here, but I sure could see her working her giles on you...and winning. Well written Mike. jwesley |
||
inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I started reading this thinking you were getting lucky! LOL Now I know the putty cat was just feeling sorry for you. |
||
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I thank you cat lovers kindly... off to school for the next couple days to learn my new job... see ya and take care... thanks for reading and replying and why don't y'all wait to post your good stuff til I get back..hehe take care all. |
||
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ROFL Kathleen |
||
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--This poem is adorable...I read it to my cat and she smiled knowingly...thanks! |
||
Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
*grins* Excellent! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
||
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, They do that don't they. Wonderful write. |
||
Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
ROFL so cute...I loved this! Thanks for the Virginia, you can put this in your private library...at the bottom of the reply page. check the box marked Add Thread to Library. The Private Library link is at the top of the screen, click on that to find the poem then. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |