Open Poetry #12 |
When The Tears Turn To Flood. |
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
When The Tears Turn To Flood. < !signature-->Anticipating deliverance from crying Tearducts red burning weeping Eyelashes straining to dry up Running nose swelling lip Days and months lost in the unknown Mind falling into tangled frown A heart that rejoiced life's joys Now torn into irrepairable shreads Whereupon a need for love betrayed Relentless of a passion to hurt Even one so close to the heart Giving no reason nothing but hatred There is no joy in harming For when tears flow there is hurting When the need to be held was lost In the eons of brutality where trust Fell to the will to destroy A good soul, a good heart When the tears turn to flood It is too late to stop the deluge When there is nowhere to feel comfort Even of those close of blood When the tears turned to flood A broken person' heart bled for love But no one came in that hour of need To alter the course of meandering tears Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) [This message has been edited by Daniel J D (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Daniel love...this is so very sad...please tell me its just a poem? If not you better be talking to me quick |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Daniel, this is quite an intense read PoetFriend... Hugs2U [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ 'When the need to be held was lost' That is a very sad thought ... holding you in mine. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Daniel I have to believe that when we desire love and we lose it at some time in our future we will find love again to soothe our heart and nourish our soul...James |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, Thank you for the reply. No I am not coping at the moment. An accumulation of many events have brought about the very truth of this poem. Coco, Your caring words are very comforting. There is a lot of hurting in this poem I can assure you. Marge, When all is lost it seems so real that no hands reach out. And what hurts the most is that those you love so much keep wanting to further your fall. James, Thank you, I accept all your warm words. But at this very moment it is extremely difficult for me. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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