For Us, We Breathe (Snow & Robert)

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Open Poetry #12

For Us, We Breathe (Snow & Robert)

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-01-27 04:48 PM

For Us, We Breathe

If I asked you to speak louder
could you
would you
hold your tongue to my ear
so I could tremble in the spell
of your words

I would whisper so close
that sweet dew
would find a garden along your neck
where lips want to plant their passion

Would you twist your fingers
tightly in my hair
bring your eyes to touch my own
and share my light

fingers like vines
would wind themselves into you
so that we climb into the light
of passion we've begun

Let the phrases leave your soul unguarded
drape it like silk upon my heartbeat
it's for you alone I live

and for Us together
we breathe

Snow&Robert
1/13/01

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-01-27 04:51 PM

Whew....oh my....I think I've stumbled upon a lover's quest...er nest....um....OK, backing out now....

[loved it!]

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2001-01-27 09:00 PM

*smiling*
we're glad you enjoyed it, Sunshine ;-)

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 2001-01-27 10:11 PM

Gorgeous and loving words here...what a beautiful piece of work!

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-01-28 08:18 AM

too many haven't seen this, yet....[umph]

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-01-28 10:39 AM

beautifully written snow and robt..enjoyed very much..

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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