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Dreamboat Harbor |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Dreamboat Paradise By: Noah Eaton 1/26/01 Behind realities eyes, I daydream of my own special world A lovers utopia, that has to be believed by everyone to be seen Deep down in bluebell eyes of the earth, softly diving through watery sapphire cascades To a place where all illusions and dreams of love becomes reality Sparkling azure Lovers Lane flows gently into the moonlit lagoon Where all lovers come together, giving of life’s love to each other Seraphs and cherubs strumming magic lyres and harps, playing heavens saxophones, drums, and harmonicas Cool dreamy jazz of loves messangers sonnets meeting all true shared spirits, their love melting together to forever stay together Black-eyed Susan palms waltz in the wintergreen wind with the morning glories Trees of rose-pedal leaves sway together, loves perfume sweeping across the hazy violet night sky Stars of all colors dance in the sky, tolling glockenspiel bells aureate of angels eyes Pieces of evening rainbow lovers walk upon above the abyss fall from the sky, melting in the water Lunar moths flicker all upon the sky, fairy shrimp lunge upon the water, lighting the night Laces of starlight luge from above, feathered trapeze suspended down through the lilac dusk Souls hold each others hands under Mother Natures botanic umbrella Shooting stars burst in the sky, aerialist angels exulting in every sweet kiss from a devoted lover Diamond venetian blinds block off all pain and sorrow from the outside Love, light, and harmony sung on and on, with the euphoric orchestra Bard laureates of the heavens speak loves greatest words to the lovers Echoing in harbors ebb, tidal waves of passion fondling every soul Dreamboats gently rock across the water, loves eternal song forever ringing in everyones ears Jazz and romance fills this utopian atmosphere forever, love growing every day As every new love opens another flowers bud, another contributed verse to loves ongoing song This dreamboat harbor is home to every soul, everyone belonging to each other This is the world I dream of, my own special world I foresee A lovers utopia, that has to be believed to be seen A place that I have not seen here, yet I still try to imagine Keeping this dream true to myself, as I believe of this magic place someday being reached |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well, Noah, I went looking for zeroes on number of posts and you and I were the only ones. I think the length of this one may have been the deterrent. If I wasn't intent on reading all those who were skipped over, like my "As Saunters in the Day," I probably would not have read this fantasy. Many good images and sweet thoughts. Perhaps using pieces of this in separate poems would help get these lovely ideas out to share. Just a thought Catch that dreamboat and love. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
This may be long but it is very beautiful. So many images and colors. Lovely write. ME |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Your sure have painted beautiful word pictures throughout this one ...such beautiful scenes to envision...ethome |
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