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Girl Of My Dreams
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Girl Of My Dreams |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Girl Of My Dreams By: Noah Eaton I dreamt that I was sauntering upon a marble pathway above the clouds on top of the world The air was scented with easing scents of cinnamon, I could hear angels sing as the skies gathered up pearls Then out upon the extent of the heavens, a vivid light begins to shine, slowly melting into a human-like form I slowly fall to my knees as I stare up at the figure, and see a lovely face appear before me The girl slowly paces toward me, as I kneel down on that marble walkaway, staring into her jewel eyes Her body was adorned with a white dress as smooth as silk, decorated with sapphires and golden glitter She had long hair, braided with the glitter of heaven’s dust, she was beautiful She comes to me and says that she was the one, the true love of my life She said that I was the fire of her heart, the one that she desired She said that whenever it was dark and she was lost, I was the star that helped her find her way home And she told me that she would be my love, and I knew that I was meant for her too For she knew how I felt, and we both shared common feelings, hopes, and happiness That’s when I raised myself up on the balls of my toes to embrace my lovers lips with my own We locked lips as we began to feel ourselves floating high above the cirrus clouds Then she planted her head on my shoulder, whispering sighs of love in my ear It’s sweet, delightful voice poured down my ear into my heart like the smooth, comforting breeze of the springtime Then I asked her when I may find her again And she told me that I will find her soon enough as long as I follow my heart and dreams And to find the magical quandary where the brighter end of the rainbow meets the land Then as I accepted her advice, I saw her angel body morph into a beautiful cloud of diamond snow The jewels of winter encircled me, they fell on me, they all felt soothing to me I landed back on the marble walkaway, and I walked down the marble path to a gate of perpetual light I met a mighty cloud mage with a maroon cape and vest decorated with chandeliers with edges of hearts and diamonds He said he had sent me here to catch a glimpse of the girl of my dreams For he was the Fortune Lord, and such visions he gives to everyone was what he loved to do And he led me into the Gate Of Light, and on my way back home I said that I will always love The girl of my dreams And that we will find each other, sometime soon! Copyright 2000 Noah Eaton 9/7/00 |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You have some mighty amazing dreams, Noah!! Beautiful!! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice dreams and an astounding ability to write of them...James |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wow, follow your dreams and when you wake I hope she's there for you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I bet she is dreaming of you as well...dont worry with love like this inside your heart she cant be to far away |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how you touched my heart with these wonderful dream.....truly loved it. Charisma |
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Pixydust Junior Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 36 |
Noah, I believe this is a dream of everyones to find someone that speaks to their heart like you describe so elegantly in this writing. Beautiful job...Thanks for sharing. Pixydust |
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