Open Poetry #12 |
Lonely's Heartbeat |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Lonely's Heartbeat I could close the door keeping you from leaving traces of your daily pilgrimage throughout my room then I wouldn't sneeze, or wake up with swollen eyes or feel as though some thing has been sleeping on my chest all night...because you couldn't get under the blanket or get nipped on the arm because you wanted attention when I wanted sleep Yes, I could close the door But I like having another heartbeat in here. < !signature--> "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice." from "Watercourse" by:Snow [This message has been edited by Snow (edited 01-26-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, this is sweet, Snow! Very sweet! Denise |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Now that is devotion. I would suppose we are talking about a CAT. Sorry I couldn't go with the sleeping on my chest. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Very moving. I enjoyed the "image" it gave. ME |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this. Nicely done. Poeminister "Awaiting welcome light of glory's gold, I search the night to fan salvation's spark." --Claire Brown Bower |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Hi Babe, Are you still singing that song? Wink! Robert Joseph ~svs~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There seems to be such an undercurrent of emotional love problems in this well written poem...thanks for sharing! I like the style very much...ethome |
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