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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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0 posted 2000-12-03 05:35 PM


Fate

True fate is out of our yesterways,
What seeds will you today sow
in the future's future of these days
To curse, or bless tommorow

What seeds will you today sow
in the soil waiting for something
To curse or bless tommorow,
no choices are giving nothing

In the soil waiting for something
will you sow a seed to be great
No choices are giving nothing
we are the governments of fate

Will you sow a seed to be great
In the future's future of these days
We are the the governments of fate
True fate is out of our yesterways
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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
1 posted 2000-12-03 06:02 PM

This is my first pantoum..hope I followed the format correctly...
A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale
2 posted 2000-12-03 06:05 PM

Well I dont know the correct form for a pantuom, but I know that I like this, VERY VERY much.

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