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The Lone Hawk Flies
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The Lone Hawk Flies |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Lone Hawk Flies sky holds fast this wintry color not the brightest of the blues less then of the summer clouds less more the thought of you and sound travels on drier air from the coming of somewhere here to my outward senses shivering the core of my spine in the lonesome high flung screech the Lone Hawk flies above searching… searching…. all the while, most high on high traverse this small rise with me through drought of summer past footsteps crunch the brittle grass what little there was is gone stand here where the spirit stands poised where grace once then stood now into the valley gaze with me far off into the copse of wood dips Lone Hawk, in his flight searching… searching…. stretched wing glints in shaft of light in the screech of his call vision of bison in lost of fall perceivable home of ghosts now gone lend me thought to travel on and I would take the Lone Hawk's flight all that's left of the spirit's plight and I will take thee with me and fade into the night Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
absolutely lovely... of course, you knew the title would catch my eye *wink*  really a fine verse here, ms. k!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
watching you fly into the distance. . .wishing that I could fly with you. . . wonderful Sunshine. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A beautiful flight. *L* |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No, Doreen, I did not know the title would catch your eye, but I am pleased it did...you will have to explain some time... Sven, a little imagination...works wonders... Sy...I love to watch the red-tailed hawk...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
sunshine, I love the imagery and the words float as gently as the air under the hawk's wings....it's beautiful |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
thank you 'Deer...for coming in to read...for seeing the whole picture... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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