Open Poetry #11 |
The Feathered Quill (tribute to Marge Tindal) |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I hear through her quill all that's wild and free and afar from a time zone still I can hear the breeze that gathers her to sleep from the mountains of free will. Her words as deep as an emerald's gleam her thoughts from ancient balm. I see the ghosts walk through her dreams and wander on earth's palm. Her blood still flowing cross polished stones slowly turning them to gold. She writes on the wind that sweeps and roams through timeworn forests of home. She bares Jasper tales lost from the eagle's eyes where prayer-songs are lying unsaid. She brings them to praise in bold open skies with memoirs from the dead. All the ground is haunted with sacred time saddened and lonely and deep. You can hear the wails of the distant cries from out of her quill that weeps. In her savoured soilitude you can hear the will of God on her name as it melts away at her rusted moods like the sunshine follows the rain. And I sit here in the womb of safety's keep and afar from a time zone still I can hear the breeze that gathers her to sleep from the mountains of free will. To a very special poet lady who knows exactly what I mean!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All I can say is I wish I had been the one to write this for she is that special Thank you Ethome Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Sunshine I'm sure you would have done a great job...It's something I wanted to do for a while and I'm glad I did.. thanks again! ethome |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW, This is fantastic, my friend. Beautiful tribute you have written. I am sure she will love it. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
ethome, you make this look like a breeze, how refreshing for our tribute feast. Ethome's got the bug, ethome's got the bug! Plagued by passion, what a way to go! Marge, he did good din't he? and cute to boot Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ You do me proud ... I will wear this dedication close to my heart and let it serve to remind me - my mission is not yet complete. <~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> From the heart of this Cherokee ... you have heard the wails of ancestral brothers through the tears shed on the trail Events not-of-our-making ... nonetheless they remain as tragic circumstances bearing our country's founders names In the salt-water pools of history, lay the tears of American Indians On blood-stained shores of indignation, never given an ending Thus in the quest of visions, are the legends laid at my feet to tell I have to pass them on to others, as I know my mission well We cannot mend - what we do not know was torn So on the pages I must write of the stories that time has borne When the White Buffalo calf is come, the legend has it that we will dwell together as ONE people - what a great day that will be The land so taken and abused - in abundant nurture will again grow The waters pure across the mountains, surely again will flow Creatures that were driven by the 'progress' of man will walk the plains to multiply all across the land Most gratifying of all - will be the peace among mankind It will be ... as it was - when man indeed was kind ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Her words as deep as an emerald's gleam her thoughts from ancient balm. I see the ghosts walk through her dreams and wander on earth's palm. Her blood still flowing cross polished stones slowly turning them to gold. She writes on the wind that sweeps and roams through timeworn forests of home. ================= Eric...this is stunning and awe-inspiring writing my poetic sir wonderful tribute to Margie... you have done her and the love and spirit for her heritage justice excellent imagery and expression very cool gesture E-babes... jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have read many tributes and a bunch for our little "White Feather" and even written some myself for her, but this one is so her. You have done a superb job in your beautiful words for her and I know that she will treasure them forever. Probably one of the best if not THE best one I have read. I applaud you for not only your verse but also for your caring nature. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It sounds just like her! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Karen for the wonderful words of encouragement and love to you too...ethome. Hey Kethry..I do got the bug.. see what you've done and I think you've been sipping that wine too...hard to keep up with ya...thanks for your always appreciated comments. Wow Marge that's some response!! It only convinces me more of the beauty within your soul and your love for your fellow humans.. the mission will never leave your mind as sure as the great light fills the sky...you're the one with the eloquent quill..speak out dear poet lady.. ethome Janet my poet pet thanks for those comments they are very special to me because I do care about such things..and if you read the conclusion of Marge's response you can understand why...thanks so much dear friend ...ethome.... Mark thank you so much for the words of encouragement I appreciate them so much and it's a real compliment coming from a wonderful writer like yourself....I remember when you started and you make me proud...as does "White Feather." and the rest of the wide open hearts that see these things the same.....take care....ethome...... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Good writing Ethome, I enjoyed this very much |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ethome...what a glorious tribute to a beautiful lady...you have found the essence of her soul...the beauty and the spirit of Lady Marge...thank you sweet poet man... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Prinny True, you did a superb tribute love, an excellant wonderful fantastic job. And you painted her so well, well done P T. Didn't I say you were a singer of true souls songs. She is very special, and so love are you. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Elizabeth you snuck in there on me thanks for taking the time to read.....ethome Thanks Seymour for stopping in for the read it is much appreciated. Paula I always look for your sweet kind words and I am so glad that you could read this one and thanks so much for your comments...I agree she is definitely a fine lady poet. Thanks so much Marsha for the singer of true soul songs comment I really appreciate your words...they're always Prinny nice...ethome |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethome--You have done such a beautiful job of portraying someone that I care for deeply...she is very special...so are you, my friend...thank you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Martie just as you are very special to us....ethome |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I had to come back and read this one more time...it is just so beautifully Marge and you wrote it so exquisitely.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Paula for enjoying this poem so much.. I apreciate you coming back in.......ethome |
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