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Open Poetry #11

Lovers Moon

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2000-11-18 01:50 AM

Lovers Moon
one of my first attempts at Concrete Poetry..

                         Beneath the lovers
                      moon upon           a
                   rose petal
               bed trembl
             ing finger
            s touched
          foridden p
         laces with
         promises le
         ft unsaid th
         e man on the
         moon closed
         his eyes whi
         le lambent b
          reezes carried
           ecstatic moans
            of pleasure acro
              ss the dunes of tim        e
                   Beneath a Lovers Moon...

'99

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2000-11-18 01:51 AM

i have a hard time
formatting on this
board, it actually
did have more of a
crecent shape before
posting it.

Snow

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

2 posted 2000-11-18 02:15 AM

You did a good job though, even so

And the poem itself is lovely!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

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