Open Poetry #11 |
Disorder |
Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
So the wheel still wearily turns, Though the cogs have started to decay, Some err,some find their lesson learnt, Some are just children here to play. So many heroes will go unsung, And so many sins will escape the law, All torn between the shadows and the sun, Just pray someone's keeping score. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very thought-provoking. And, yes, I do believe that there is Someone who sees all. And, as cliche as it may sound, what goes around definitely does come around. Great write, Tony! sp 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
All torn between the shadows and the sun, Enjoyed Tony.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Thanks,Snowpants and Victoria. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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