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Open Poetry #11

needs a title...ideas?

PoemCrazy
Member

since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

0 posted 2000-12-02 04:05 PM

Hi!

here goes...

Don't say you love me.
Show me with your eyes.
Let me see the fire inside,
and mirror it with mine.
Speak without words.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-12-02 04:07 PM

Welcome! How about "The Fire Inside"
because I am a music lover and it reminded me of Bob Seger!

Good to have you here.

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2000-12-02 04:36 PM

Hi, PoemCrazy... Welcome to Passions... This is a great place... This is a wonderful little piece of "Unspoken" words... Very nice... Check your email for a special greeting..

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-12-03 12:10 PM

Hi there PC. . .

I would say that "Unspoken" is a great title. . . welcome. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

4 posted 2000-12-03 12:17 PM

Eyes That Speak
Welcome you have entered with a very good poem. Words don't have to be said, when images can complete the thought.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-12-03 12:27 PM

PoemCrazy~
Welcome to Passions.

I fancied your render
and hope to tender
a possible title
to stoke the fire
of unspoken desire
From a blaze you will remember
how about - 'Mirrored Ember' ?
Softly glowing
without yet knowing
the words that remain unspoken

Enjoyed your thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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PoemCrazy
Member

since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

6 posted 2000-12-13 11:52 AM

Hi!

It took me a while to find this post to reply, thanks for the responses.

i've put all of 'em on the page around it and will stare at it for a while...tom

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