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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A Whisper's Caress A Whisper's Caress- Her words are fingers that touch our hearts with softness Poeminister |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very lovely ...enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Poeminister took the words out of my mouth and put them in verse Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
OH!!! (wiping the tears from my eyes), this is the most beautiful thing anyone has every done for me. I am so moved by this sweet gesture, Thank you so very much. I wish I could hug you. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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PanDol Senior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 1245USA |
This is excellent poeminister. Great expression with this little ditty. ~PanDol |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
putting this in my library Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
great tribute..and what a way to introduce this reader to her..will be looking out for her work  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 This is so soft and delicate and says so much in what would take me 30 lines to say...these little gems are amazing in the hands of the right weaver...such as yourself~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I agree with butterfly....its one soft delicate senryu, and I love it Charisma |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
very good writing. saying more with less. Richard |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
POE, this is a beautiful write and I thank you for the sweet delight of this read... [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Such a perfect verse From the very pen of you Lovely Senryu ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have said in this all that need be said. She is truely one of the gifts in these pages that really make it worth being here. Excellently done sir. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very, very nice, Poe - I shall be listening carefully for words Whispered ...  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Poe, Oh very well done indeed! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Leaving behind a sigh. This was soft and beautiful. *sigh* I love the way it felt. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How did I ever miss this gem...so glad it popped back up for some fresh air! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This was so very beautiful! I loved the spirit and love within the form. Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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