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Ellipsing Memories.....
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Ellipsing Memories..... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Ellipsing Memories ellipsing word here and there from nowhere come ellipsing thoughts turned memory lingering veiled thoughts once bought through time high maintenance come soft once wrought over time lingering... what I wanted was not me took foothold on reality but always the thoughts were lingering and some days only ellipsing saw this done that been there… come here ellipse with me make memories and dreams then dream reality with me and ellipse me along a song, on keyboard just a click away but fingers sing when ellipsing toward spring… and like the sun I shall then ellipse into tomorrow yesterday… Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, Just wonderful. I loved it very much. "saw this done that been there… come here ellipse with me" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
karilea i like the idea here yuh and the execution was just ellipsing yuh thats a good thing |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Daniel, this is the best compliment, to have a piece revisited...thank you... WOW...right back at ya! thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ellipsing as asked. . .  Wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Again, you've taken the simplest words and thoughts and made them sing... "Ellipsing!"Now, Sunshine, don't be getting ahead of yourself and becoming tomorrow prematurely. Bob <>< |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine...  I enjoyed this read |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Sven...{~,^} OK, Bob, I won't, promise...{~,^} thank you Coco...{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
karilea- gracious...this was beautiful. the beauty of this seems to have taken my words. loved this i did especially the following lines... "and like the sun I shall then ellipse into tomorrow yesterday" *sigh* excellent write! take care. ~amy~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amy, your sigh is exquisite...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is stunning, amazingly well written, although you never produce anything less than outstanding. You really are getting to be a master craftwoman. Wonderful. Take care MM (It's one of my rush days  )Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sunshine..you have everything beautifully interconnected in this poems' wonderful memories...I love all the styles you use.. very good read!!....ethome |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I truly LOVE the individuality in your style......flows beautifully and your personality and thoughts just dance! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, you are so kind with your praise, thank you... ethome, interconnection...good word...thank you... dreamkeeper, there are many individuals within these walls...styles abound...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Such flowing, beautiful thoughts. I missed reading too much while I was away. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Catalinamoon, never go rambling...we need you here to inspire and transfix us...thank you for reading... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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