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Moonlight Eyes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I looked at your face neath soft moonlight the stars were in your eyes our feet walked on wisps of air as we floated into the night. The stars shone a thousand lights and rays from the moon reflected with a sparkle in the shimmering blue pools of your eyes. The evening mist came trying to hide the moonbeams but twinkling eyes brightened the night sky. Night skies, twinkling stars, and moonbeams can not compare to the light that shines from your heart. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Very nicely done ================= Night skies, twinkling stars, and moonbeams can not compare to the light that shines from your heart. "Don't wish upon a star...Reach for one!!" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The stars shone a thousand lights and rays from the moon reflected with a sparkle in the shimmering blue pools of your eyes. ============== gentle spirit...this is such lovely imagery..just beautiful ... and wonderful expression of the emotions as well. very well written take care jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Witch's Brat Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 100 |
After I saw the title I had to read this. I love the imagery...so romantic. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Jeffrey, thanks so much. *s* Janet thank you. I don't write alot of free style stuff, but this one was fun. Thanks. *s* WB, I guess I'm just a romantic at heart. Thanks. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
what can I say more complimentary than "I wish I'd written it" ? |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Love the imagary  Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful piece.. I especally love the last stanza. You paint some beautiful pictures here, my friend. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Or the light that shines from this poem. . . Wonderful GS. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely..lovely..lovely...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh, yes, romance lives!!!!!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bill, thank you so much but hon, I think you have written it a million times every time that you write from your heart. Thanks. Maria, thanks so much for taking the time to comment. LB, thank you for being able to see the pictures, that is always of the highest compliments.  Sven my friend, the light shines......from in the heart. thanks James, ~blushing~ and thanking you. AWWW Rose, thanks. I think romance always lives in the heart of those who write the written words that say what the heart says. Thanks all so much, ~D~ On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
so so pretty Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When it is written from the heart it will always come out with the beauty of this one. Now look who is shining our way. YOU of course. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Whisper, thank you so much. The pretty, comes from the love. Thanks. Thank you Mark Some of the most beautiful things I think a poet can ever write are those things that come from the heart. *s* ~D~ On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks Vandana, I appreciate the read. *s* |
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