Open Poetry #11 |
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Eyes of Springtime Blue |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869![]() |
O, the fragrance of a fantasy < !signature-->'Tis a dream come true for thou art my dream with eyes of springtime blue The first time our eyes touched hence, a moment I shall not forget whilst thou held me in your arms Thy shoulder my tears doth wet Thy voice, a meadowlark in flight thy lips, passion fruit to kiss thou art a painting in mine eyes for thou art my fondest wish Thence we kissed for the first time my heart beat like a drum Intoxicated with the moment t'was A feeling of Jamaican rum O, the fragrance of a fantasy 'Tis a dream come true for thou art my dream with eyes of springtime blue A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ My ! ... the title alone is lovely. What a delicious color it brings to mind ! Pleasurable read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It's so wonderful when the fairytale becomes reality!!!! A soft sigh of contentment..this sooo satisfies the romantic heart!!! ![]() Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Marge..thank you so much for visiting..nice to hear from you.. ![]() Pepper..thank you for peeking in again today..you early bird you haa.. ![]() ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Victoria- this is very lovely. ![]() i agree with Marge...the title is beautiful.. ![]() love it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much Vicky..nice to hear from you today..glad you enjoyed.. ![]() ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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