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Let's Go For A Walk (Response to 'Deer's "Will You Be Kind To Me?..") |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion 
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Deer Yes I'll be very kind to you, I'll give you more than you are due, An extra anchor, maybe two, When you walk the plank. I'll prick you lightly with my sword, As you proceed ever toward, The end that is your just reward, Now get out on that plank! Ruthlessly you ply your pen, Wooing, pleasing, tempting them, Breeding jealousy in all us men, You'll look wonderful on that plank. Your wimpy ways with the fairer sex, That leaves them patting their fair breasts, Truthfully, I must confess, Is why I want you on that plank! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
But LngJhn, what happens when you accidentally fall off with him? Should I cry, or laugh twice as hard? Hee hee hee. Nice write, very amusing. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Welcome back LngJhnAg, I have a feeling Mr Deer will skip the walk with you. He just can't help sweet talking the women. There are those who do and those who just talk about it. I wonder which he is  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LongJohn's back and it's gonna get funny hey nah, hey nah...LongJohn's back! LJA if you would take a clue to look inside of you pull out that clever wit use a little part of it weave a song that wends its way into the heart of passionate fray then you too would have no worry so please do write so, and hurry... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Long John, what a come back! Way to go! Keth Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dear Dear Saxon Lady - as an old sea dawg, do you really think I would actually get out there on the plank with that rascal? Especially if the plank was pointing windward? erk! Additionally, I hope you would cry! Inot - You wonder which he is? A talker or a doer? C'mon! He's a talker! Look at his forlorn picture, fer cryin' out loud! What woman could ever get close to that homely critter? Now, go look at MY picture. See what I mean? heh heh Karilea - Wild thing! You make my heart sing. You make everything, yummy (or something like that). Thank you for your encouragement. Kethry - Yes. I must confess. I couldn't stay away from all you lovely, wonderful, soft, pleasing, woo-hoo-ey women. Thank you for not forgetting me, like so many of these other barracudas in here did. I know now who I might have a chance with. quick, ol' Long John - write down their names before they delete their posts |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Such merriment weaved within these lines! Now, you really wouldn't DO this to Balladeer would you? I mean, surely you would rescue him at the last minute?  < !signature-->What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
don't talk that way about Balladeer he hand his penn with grace my dear yeah I like to be kind to him my friend his words are sweet and he present a noble man with a gentle heart and deserves a lovely reward so if you don't mind leave that plank behind and take it as a man step out that silly plan well smile at him my dear shake hands with Balladeer. ~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~Charisma |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
you'll walk 'Deer upon the plank? you say he'll drown? LongJohn, well spank you! that's not nice, you know it cruel! i should take you back to school! you are quite an evil prankster threatening the 'Deer with planks, sir! i knew you did not like kitties from your nasty little ditties written 'bout desires for kicking - sly and slick, your ploys try tricking gentle, kind, and giving persons! with each pome you write, it worsens! i tell you what, you nasty sailor - pandora's HOT, her feet won't fail her! if you take the 'Deer a plankin', he will be quite happy, thankin' you for leading him out walking -- i'll be waiting there, cat-docking! when he falls off in the ocean, i will save him, i've the notion... pandora's soft fur can protect him from the sea, as you reject him!   < !signature--> beware pandora's box... [This message has been edited by pandora (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
My gracious thanks to Rose, Charisma and my great friend Pandore for their unwavering devotion As for you, LongJohn.... Your words will never make me bitter The whole world knows that you're a quitter Who sleeps at night in kitty litter That's what we all know. You'd like to be known as a stud Although you look like Elmer Fudd Let's face it, dude, you're just a dud And you flirt just for show. It's true your jabs are never done Too bad your jokes are never fun Cause Lorelei's the clever one You're ballast...don't you know? |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Yep...Lorelei is the clever one... She married him, the witty son! ily |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hi Ho Silver..... Nice to see ya posting... even if you are picking on our Deerest poet..  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hmmppphhh - all you lovely ladies sticking up for that scalawag! It makes me want to cry. Thank goodness I have Lorelei on my side. What's that? Lorelei chats with 'Deer on ICQ? ohhhh nooooooooo Thank you all for the great welcome back. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
LongJohn....this is superb....I too agree with your understanding and anchor giving...why...I wish for Balladeer a large ship of gold.....and it still not be enough to pay his doctor bills.......I see you haven't lost a thing sailor!!! |
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