Open Poetry #11 |
Hand In Hand |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Hand In Hand Karen Torbiak 2000 Hand in hand we walk the pages in a world of faceless strangers whose emotions light the blank screen filling hearts with wonderous art Words of beauty, words of passion all shared with us who feast on life feeling deep within our spirit the perfection of each poem read We travel the world in one page and marvel at the scenes they paint as we see through eyes now open, places and people never met Learning through the poems painted bright with hearts in love or hurt by pain we know these people who we share our heartfelt word from writer's pen Hand in hand we walk the pages of each person's soul revealed and love them from our deepest self freely offering sweetest love Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, we do and as some would be honored to be published, and it is a good thing, nothing is more meaningful than reading another poet's words upon the screen, knowing that they wrote them for us. It is an honor to read the words of so many poets who touch us daily from deep inside, when they are hurting, scared, lost, sorrowful or just plain joyous with the expectancy of a new love. It is something I believe that keeps poetry alive and keeps all of us alive. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
we walk the pages of each person's soul revealed ===================================== *sigh* Thank you. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Irish Rose Thank you so much for your beautiful and kind words. It is such a pleasure to me to get to know so many with such loving hearts as reflected in their words. Much love to you from me. Interloper *sigh* sweet one, you are very welcome. I am glad you liked it. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Witch's Brat Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 100 |
It's amazing that we are able to do that. Wonderful poem, Karen! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Learning through the poems painted bright with hearts in love or hurt by pain we know these people who we share our heartfelt word from writer's pen Hand in hand we walk the pages of each person's soul revealed and love them from our deepest self freely offering sweetest love ================== Karen, this is lovely and sincere ... this place and poetry does indeed connect us all ... wonderful writing...so glad your finding so much poetic pleasure and inspiration here. take care jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the words walking the pages hand in hand...very nicely done ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hand in hand and heart in heart we've walked here from the start heart in heart and hand in hand we are the people of Passions band. . . Wonderul Startime. . . this is how we are. . . and how it should be. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"We travel the world in one page and marvel at the scenes they paint as we see through eyes now open, places and people never met" "Hand in hand we walk the pages of each person's soul revealed and love them from our deepest self freely offering sweetest love" Oh my ... this is so beautiful Karen! You've penned this with such wonderful emotion, and it truly reflects how so many of us feel within this wonderful haven. Very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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