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Now I Lay Me ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Now I Lay Me ~*Marge Tindal*~ I have layed myself gently down to sleep begging His measure of night without weep Knowing that even after slumbering deep you are still - mine to keep In the quiet memories that I've found within the dreams of soft surround That upon the morning waking are still there for my taking Wrapping you gently around my day making the most of my memory play Until the night comes calling you away And then I will dream you again ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
finally im the first to comment on your poem.... Good rhythm and rhyme in this piece...i can never write in rhyme and admire those who do  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"UNTIL THE NIGHT COMES CALLING YOU AWAY" "AND THEN I WILL DREAM YOU AGAIN" Marge, this poem just warms the heart with tender softness like white morning dove... the likes of which is scribed from your pen. It's a treasure keeper4me Thank you for this beauty of a read... [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
OOPSIE... had 2 thread to library sorri  [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-30-2000).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I wish for all your dreams to come true! This poem reminds me of my childhood prayer...hugs! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the quiet memories that I've found within the dreams of soft surround That upon the morning waking are still there for my taking Wrapping you gently around my day making the most of my memory play ================= Margie this is WONDERFUL, ENCHANTING .. oh my I LOVE this beautiful poem... its reads like a softly whispered dream... this is poetry in motion my dear... and my new fav of yours... "within the dreams of soft surround' what an exquisite line that is... you muse needs to be kissed for this one girlie ... you have written my butterfly heart in this one... *SIGH* ... me Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
IM BACK...did ya miss me LOL YA got me so excited I forgot to put this in my library ...  later-sweet-dreams-gator *CLICK* Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Beautiful |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I am running out of compliments for you, you are absolutely sending me in a world of wonder. Great. "In the quiet memories that I've found within the dreams of soft surround That upon the morning waking are still there for my taking" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, absolutely enchanting, I love this one. You write soooooooo well. Really really great work from you. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Never without a memory of the one you love .. even in your dreams Marge...I like the way you took this through the night and day and back into your dreams again .. never to let go of the love in your heart ....good stuff Marge!! |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
** SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL..skillfully written and delivered!!!!** ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ mutington(joyce) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ You're a sweetie ! Thank you - bet you COULD write a rhymer ! Dani~ Awwww ! Thank you soooooooooo much. Martie~ Glad to stir a memory for you, my sis. JanetMarie~ I will give me muse a *kiss* for you ! Smoochie - Smoochie Koochie - Koochie  Paula~ Thank you for the reply, honey. JD~ If you like it - then I'm very pleased. Thank you. Marsha~ Thank you for such a nice compliment. ETHome~ I like the way you breathed in the entire piece. Thank you a lot. Joyce~ Thank you so very much for letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hmmppphhhh - Talk about bait and switch! I was kinda hoping for something a little spicier... something about you and *puke* Toerag. Seriously, though, this is a sweet poem. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- such lovely thoughts...and so softly penned... 'Wrapping you gently around my day making the most of my memory play Until the night comes calling you away And then I will dream you again' i just love this... love and hugs, ~vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 12-02-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LongJohn~ Spice may be nice Butsweet is a treat ! Vicky~ Thank you, dear. Hope you're feeling all better. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Wrapping you gently around my day making the most of my memory play Until the night comes calling you away And then I will dream you again' Love those dreams, Marge! Beautiful poem! sp 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Wrapping you gently around my day making the most of my memory play Until the night comes calling you away And then I will dream you again ahhhhhh so beautiful, Marge ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I wish I could do what you do.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ Thank you for dropping in on a dream. Wynter~ So glad to know you liked it. Balladeer~ If no other thought was ever maintained - you know what this one from you means to me. Thanking you in my special way. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ The memories are soft and wonderful getting you through the days, but it is the dreams of the night that will become the realities of tomorrow. I love this one. Are you peeking in my window again?? Love ya' LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge--Beautiful soft flow with this poem...I love it much. Nicely written. Poeminister |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Snuggling up to this one REAL close my friend. Now how comfortable would that be? You know that I loved this one my and of course the heart it poured from. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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