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Love Fills My Soul
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Love Fills My Soul |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Love Fills My Soul Time is not my dearest friend Hope feels as if it's at an end My love is away, far from me I feel as blue as I can be I'm sad and my heart it aches Please return for loves sake Love is the feeling that I crave It makes my heart misbehave When you touch me I believe Your love my soul will recieve Your presence brings me calm Fills my spirit with loves balm Your words act like a prayer How I love you it's just not fair My heart it is yours to keep My love is an ocean soul deep A river running fast and wide Too much of it for me to hide I am firmly in your tight grasp No way out, to your soul I clasp Further down this slippery slope Nothing to do but give up hope Love has decided to play a game Never ever will I be the same Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-30-2000).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~ **SIGH** "Further down this slippery slope Nothing to do but give up hope Love has decided to play a game Never ever will I be the same" Perfect!  -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Marsha this is so pretty ...I love it.. it's so full of honest yearning for your deepest love and you've captured that mood very well.....ethome |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marsha beautiful penned from your heart, love it my dear ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, to pen the words of another poet - Iloveitwhenyouwritelikethis.  Write on! Keth Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, thank you love, it's my I want him to be closer poem. So I send my love out and hope it comes back.  Thanks for the sigh!Take care Mushy Prinny True, why thanks love, pretty it is? You see I really wouldn't know. But I'll take your word for it. I can look at all the other poets here and I see marvellous magical works, I look at mine and I think, so! I truly cannot see any merit in it at all. You say they are getting better but I can't see it at all, not at all. So thanks truly. Prinny True Charisma, well thank you very much, I truly do thank you, and thank you for the hugs. They are really appreciated Kethry, you do love? Like how? Thanks love, you know I really mean it too. Take care Slushy Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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