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A Melody in my Soul...
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A Melody in my Soul... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
A Melody in My Soul… As I peek through the window that has been offered by your eyes, I long to take the journey to your very core. After following a well traveled path I come upon a bastion around your heart, impenetrable, just as it had been bequeathed by the many others before me Wanting so to reach beyond these walls, my heart projects out a sweet song of devotion. As the melody is true to my soul’s desire, I can do little more than hold hope that the power of this aria will pervade. And I, unlike the others, will be gifted with the heart of you in my heart’s embrace… Annie Lehberg achildsheart 9-21-00 Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is beautiful....If he reads your words he is sure to open for a moment, so you can sneak in. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Very well written. I am certain he will awaken. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I long to take the journey to your very core. so well thought out...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A Whisper's Caress, wonderful write. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
very beautiful.. *sighs* -Tier |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A Whisper's caress, Very lovely poem. Such strong melodies will break down the most extensive fortifications. Nicely written. Poeminister Love grants in a moment what toil can hardly achieve in an age. -Goethe [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 11-17-2000).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Everyone, thank you sooo much for the very kind responses. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
AWC: This is beautifully written - I so enjoy your work. well done  Roniece |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely... I enjoyed it! *S* |
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